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nguoi ban quat soan bai mua la lanh dum la rach noi doi

 
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PostPosted: Fri Mar 02, 2018 9:28 am    Post subject: nguoi ban quat soan bai mua la lanh dum la rach noi doi Reply with quote

nguoi ban quat may man soan ngu van lop 6 bai mua chung minh nhan dan ta luon song theo dao li "la lanh dum la rach chung minh rang noi doi co hai cho ban than

nguoi ban quat may man moi thu cua vu tru nhu sam chop, mua deu "doi" len dau "boem".Chu "doi" duoc diep lai 3 lan, khong chi cuc ta su vat va dai nang dam mua cua "bo em", cua nguoi nong dan Viet Nam xua nay ma con mang ham nghia, nguoi dan cay cay cay trong bom dan chien tranh, vua cung cap vua duong dau. Sau van tho la long ham an, kinh yeu cua be Khoa. Doc bai tho "Hat gao lang ta", ta biet them hinh anh nguoi me, nguoi chi sau luy tre xanh da chan lam tay bun, 2 suong mot nang... De lam cho nen "hat vang lang ta" gui ra chien truong:

Mua''la 1 bai tho hay. the gioi dot nhien trong con mua rao o lang que duoc cam nhan va the hien tinh te. nhung cau tho ngan 1, hai, 3... Chu dan cai vao nhau, phoi hop co van chan da tao nen nhac dieu tho, goi ta tieng mua roi, nghe rat vui. Phep nhan hoa va nghe thuat su dung nhung tu lay (roi rit, cuon cuon, tan ngan, dung dua, troc teu, kho khoc, khanh khach, u u, lop bop, chom chom, ha he) da tao nen nhung van tho, nhung hinh anh hon nhien, ngo nghinh, thi vi. "Mua" la mot bai tho dac sac cua tuoi tho va tam hon tuoi tho.
Ca khong gian menh mong bat ngat bong ngap tran trong nuoc.Tren nhung mai hien cac con mua thi nhau roi xuong, nhung bong bong mua sui bot roi do vo tan trong ko trung. Trong chiec nang oi nong cua mua he, neu chung ta duoc don cho 1 con mua rao thi that hanh phuc biet bao.



nhung cau tho cuoi cua bai tho da khien cho buc tranh ” Mua” tro thanh sinh dong hon bao gio het khi voi su xuat hien cua con nguoi trong mot buc tranh bong nhien hung vi nhu the nao.

Bai tho nay duoc tac kem chat luong viet voi the tho khon cung hao phong, tu do, nhip dieu khi nhanh, khi gap gap tao thanh su an nhip cho bai tho. Nghe thuat nhan cach hoa cua tac nhai da lam cho cac co cay hoa la cung so huu tam hon, lam nguoi doc cam thay het suc thu vi.

soan ngu van lop 6 bai mua sinh ra va to len tai mot lang que thuoc thi xa Nam Sach, nang khieu tho cua e co dai dang khoa nay no rat som. pho bien bai tho trong tap Goc san va khoang troi duoc tac fake viet khi con hoc tieu hoc. Bai tho Mua duoc chang thi si ti hon nay viet nam len 9 tuoi, luc cuoc khang chien chong Mi cua quan chung ta dang dien ra vo cung khoc liet. tu luc gan mua toi khi mua roi, canh bau troi mat dat tu sam chop may mua, trong khoang cay co toi nhung con vat nhu cho, ga con, lu kien,... Deu duoc cam nhan qua tam hon tuoi tho rat hon nhien ngo nghinh.

Bai tho viet theo bi quyet noi loi dong dao, so huu 63 cau tho rat ngan, mang 10 cau chi voi 1 chu, mang 37 cau tho hai chu. 6 Cau tho 3 chu, 9 cau tho 4 chu, va chi mang mot cau tho 5 chu. Qua su tham do do, ta thay phuong phap viet cua Khoa rat bong dung, hon nhien, cau tho noi tiep xuat hien theo cam nhan va xuc cam trong khoang sap mua toi mua roi, va sau cung la hinh anh nguoi bo cua Khoa di cay ve trong con mua du doi, dam dia.

mo man bai tho nhu mot tieng reo cua tre em cat len: gan mua / gan mua. nhay cam nhat la loai moi bay ra de don mua. Tai that, sao ma be Khoa phan mau duoc, nhan biet duoc tuoi tac cac con moi: Moi tre / Bay cao / Moi gia / Bay tot. Tiep theo la bay ga con Roi rit tau noi / an nup. Ong troi, cay mia, kien, la kho, co ga, bui tre, hang buoi, chop, sam, cay dua, ngon mung toi... Duoc chu be nhac den, noi den. Tac nhai dung nhan hoa hoi hay, tao nen cac lien tuong thu vi, bieu lo su muong tuong phong phu. May den keo phu day troi, tuong nhu Ong troi / mac ao giap den / Ra tran. La mia dai, nhon sac. Gio thoi, la mia xao xac bay, khac nao muon ngan cay mia / Mua guom. Kien chay mua, nhu tan vo to, nha tho tuong nhu Kien / tien quan / Day tuyen duong. ko khi hung trang cua lich su dan toc thoi chong Mi da de dat vao tho Khoa.

chung minh nhan dan ta luon song theo dao li "la lanh dum la rach trong khoang ong troi den nghin cay mia, dan kien, dong dao deu ra tran, deu mua guom deu hanh binh, ho het deu tham gia vao cuoc dieu binh hung vi (tho cua To Huu). Ca mot khong gian rong to van dong vi sap mua: La kho / Gio cuon Bui bay / Cuon cuon, co ga, bui tre, hang buoi, cay dua, ngon mong toi - the gioi cay co nay duoc nhan hoa. phuong phap nhan xet cua chu be 9 tuoi tuong doi tinh te, hom hinh, co ga rung tai nghe. Bui tre Tan ngan – Go toc. Hang buoi triu qua, trong gio, nhu mot nguoi hien dang du dua - be lu con - Dau tron - long loc. Gio thoi moi khi 1 manh. Cay dua Sai tay – Be, ngon mung toi dancing mua. mot ko gian nghe thuat, 1 toan cau tao vat dong day, song dong, di chuyen khi troi sap mua. so dong deu voi vong hon, voi cam giac, mang hanh dong... Duoc mieu ta qua cac hinh anh nhan hoa rat ngo nghinh, dang yeu. sap mua, sam chop rung chuyen, rach xe troi dat. Chop rach troi ngang troi... Sam nhu 1 ten he ganh xuong san - Khanh khach - Cuoi. ngung thi congDay la cam nhan vu tru cua tuoi tho.

Canh troi mua duoc bieu lo bang 14 cau tho. Mua roi trong tieng gio u u nhu xay lua. Giot mua lop bop lop dop roi! Trong man mua, dat troi phat trien thanh mu trang nuoc. Va mua cheo mat san sui bot. Be Khoa da dan dung mot hoat canh mua voi coc, cho va cay la that hom hinh:

khi troi chuyen mua, may den van vu, gio thoi u u nhu tieng coi xay lua. Troi bat dau mua. Mua roi lop bop tren tau cau, tau chuoi. Mua nang hat hon. Dat troi trang xoa. Mua lon, gio to. Sau cac ngay thang kho han, dat gap nuoc sui bot, bong bong day san. Coc sung suong nhay chom chom, sam chop di dung, cho am anh sua lnh oi. Cay buoi, cay na trong vuon he ha vay la don cac hat mua dau mua mat ruoi. e dang khoa ta that kheo, that dung khung canh 1 tran mua ma minh Quan sat duoc trong khoang ngoi nha nho be.

dong tai cua nai lung dai dang khoa la da biet lua chon nhung tinh tiet dien hinh, dac sac de dua vao bai tho, lam cho buc tranh bong nhien voi suc hut la lung.

Hinh anh con nguoi o cuoi bai tho duoc xay dung theo loi an du khoa truong. Nguoi cha di cay ve duoi troi mua tam ta da duoc nhin bang anh mat yeu thuong, cam phuc cua dua con: Bo' em di cay ve - Doi sam - Doi chop - Doi ca troi mua. Hinh anh con dua o day so huu tam voc lon lao va phong do hien ngang, so huu the sanh voi bat chot, vu tru.

chung minh rang noi doi co hai cho ban than mang the tho tu do khoang dat, nhip tho ngan va nhanh, phoi hop mang viec tieu dung nhieu phep nhan hoa, bai tho da bieu hien chinh xac va sinh dong khung canh truoc va trong con mua rao o lang que; trinh bay tai Quan sat, trinh bay tinh te va doc dao cua tran dai dang khoa.

Tho thieu nhi cua tran dai dang khoa mang pho quat bai hay trong Do Mua la 1 bai tiet sac. nha tho ti hon voi tai Nhin vao tinh te, hai hoa tri nghi den phong phu, ky dieu, biet dung trong khoang ngu hon nhien. Nho vay den nay, tho e dai dang khoa van duoc lua tuoi thieu nien, nhi dong ham me.
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